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    dots Submission Name: With Youdots
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    Author: ScottVampire22
    ASL Info:    22/M/Oh
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 566
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2290



    Description:
       Song I wrote to my Gf.


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    dotsWith Youdots
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    It's always the same thing
    it never seems right.

    The pressure of losing of
    losing the fight,

    I've fought, I've chosen
    I've cried, I've taken.

    And, why?

    It's always the same thing
    it never seems different.

    they always blame me and
    put you down just to hurt me.

    I've always wondered
    what this would...be like

    I've always worried..
    .it wouldn't be right.

    Fuck everyone
    I'm in loooooooove with you.

    They all can't hate me
    and keep doing whatever they wanna do.

    I'll always be here
    Only to be there....baby with you

    So they can fuck off, I'm better off.

    With Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!....................With You..........................You!

    Well do you remember when we first got together and I was so sure I couldn't get you..

    Then after you told me that you wanted to hold me I let you...

    And they tried to hurt you but I took it for you so I could be sure I protected you...........

    So I could take every hit that they tried throwing at you! WELL!

    Fuck everyone
    I'm still in loooooooove with youuuuuuuuu.

    They all can't hate me
    and keep doing whatever they wanna dooo.

    I'll always be here
    Only to be there....baby with youuuuuu

    So they can fuck off, I'm better off.

    It was stupid for us to get into this mess together.

    But without you I won't see forever.

    I'd rather die than to ever..

    Fuck everyone
    I'm in loooooooove with you.

    They all can't hate me and
    keep doing whatever they wanna do.

    I'll always be here
    Only to be there....baby with you

    So they can fuck off, I'm better off.


    With You.







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      thank you baby it is beautiful i love it and i love u
    | Posted on 2013-02-23 00:00:00 | by serenitysuicide | [ Reply to This ]


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