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    dots Submission Name: Sunsetdots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 139/254/170
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSunsetdots
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    Two palms of remnant light fade
    With the meteor blaze
    trailing off into the west,
    this high pitched mountain trail,
    crimson in the gathered mist.
    Not really sure what Iím supposed to feel
    And how to act upon it, the silent
    Gladness at the midnight rain and me
    Under the blankets.
    This tasteful amaranth bud beckons
    To lean into its whispering neck,
    Pronounce the prophecies deceased, oh truly,
    This must be the end of times.




    Submitted on 2013-02-25 09:38:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I find this soothingly sensual like having the froth of frenzy sponged off then slipping into the aftermath of amazement.
    | Posted on 2013-03-01 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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