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    dots Submission Name: The devils work shop..dots
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    Author: angelagresham
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 3/3/3
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I trying to put thing together just tell me how it is so far


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    dotsThe devils work shop..dots
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    Tears falling, nobody is there to catch the tears.
    Depressions work on your heart like the devil works shop.
    Thoughts turn into a racing train.
    Suicide is the cure to pain but also a selfish thing to do.




    Submitted on 2013-02-28 08:02:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I sometimes feel like that, I felt like that when my grandmother died.....
    I think that this hits some of the core problems with some people now a days.
    Please keep writing, really enjoy reading them.
    | Posted on 2013-03-11 00:00:00 | by EragonaElven | [ Reply to This ]


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