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    dots Submission Name: Deadboltdots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDeadboltdots
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    The problem that I have with

    closed doors

    is not that they keep others

    out,

    but

    that they keep me

    locked in.




    Submitted on 2013-03-04 22:13:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The trouble that I have with open mindedness is that it's open minded. If your not careful you wind up lost forever in the quandaries of the psychic quagmire.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-03-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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