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    dots Submission Name: Social Mediadots
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    Author: Erreur
    ASL Info:    20 / M / Canada
    Elite Ratio:    7.32 - 19/25/14
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 86



    Description:
       I mean in the most honest sense this is a failure of a haiku. Its really vain and such. However, I wanted a haiku to express the similarity between twitter and haikus. I felt, for a long time, that twitter sorta limited communication and meaning. I thought we lost a lot in the shift from paragraphs to sentences. But Haiku's have this strange ability to maintain themselves as deep and thought provoking. Despite being so short. So perhaps twitter has its advantages, bringing me back to a simpler mindset.


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    dotsSocial Mediadots
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    New ways to express
    In modern age of twitter
    Haikus are perfect




    Submitted on 2013-03-08 17:02:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      mass marketed lives
    l'histoire - soulless self aware
    friend us, we beg thee
    | Posted on 2013-07-29 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      You dead right and all.


    Lost in dawn's soundtrack
    chorus of loudmouth birds,
    My fool phone's ring-tone.
    | Posted on 2013-06-07 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      U say this 4 what purpose? Sparse is the new nifty, yah. Who needs TMI.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-03-08 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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