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    dots Submission Name: Ownershipdots

    Author: Erreur
    ASL Info:    20 / M / Canada
    Elite Ratio:    7.32 - 19/25/14
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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       Ever wonder what you live for? I often find my self asking this question. Its not because of some internal curiosity. Its not because some greater force told me I must. I think that the main reason I live is just to fulfill some sort of contractual obligation I feel to my parents. I've sorta decided that my birth will be considered repayed once I become a doctor and a father. By accomplishing this I've fulfilled the dreams my dad and mom have for me.

    Man... what'll I do once I've accomplished that?

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    Donít live for science,
    Donít live for a religion,
    Do I live for me?

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      a life less questioned
    by a harried father thoughts
    racing treadmills home
    | Posted on 2013-07-29 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      I reckon it must be biological, like enzyme bleach, anthrax, perhaps more like the power lust of a plankton ... I'm not sure this one works at all: it's an ancient question, so that the poet needs to come at it with a new colour, sort of ?
    | Posted on 2013-06-07 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]

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