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    dots Submission Name: Deaddots
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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsDeaddots
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    If only Human it would be dead,
    but still alive with a devilish grin.

    they walk slowly with broken limbs,
    some with a gaping mouths calling,
    death has rolled in.

    No hood, nor a scythe in hand,
    this is the end and it looks just like you.
    Don't let the fingers of fate find a grasp on you,
    once a hold it's too late.

    Watch yourself be devoured by your own kin,
    nothing will be left with this gluttony of a feast.
    Your bones will be picked clean, by a demon beast.




    Submitted on 2013-03-10 23:46:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The entire time I read this I think "Oh my gosh the zombies are coming to get me!" lol its a really good write though and I enjoyed it.
    ~WinterRain~
    | Posted on 2014-09-30 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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