your vocab is very extensive. i really appreciate your word choice throughout this piece.
the subject hand has been visited many a time in many different ways... it seems love and death are what poetry is about... the only difference is how far along the track you are as to how the messages are conveyed.
prolly dont allow yourself to wallow in these thoughts for too long because they are very powerful and can become all consuming if you arent careful and it is very hard to teach yourself a different way of life after you have fallen in too far if that makes sense.
i'd be keen to see more punctuation through the piece. youve used linebreaks most effectively but i cannot help but think some of the punch is missing due to the lack of punctuation.
the cosmos has me now is a very powerful place to end.. you should make it smack the reader in the face.
I can relate to this poem, i was at a point in my life where everything became nothing to me, death was everything and everything was death lol. Hope i make sense or am relating. Very creative and imaginative keep it up :0)