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    dots Submission Name: Womandots
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    Author: Bang
    ASL Info:    38/F/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 21/24/16
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsWomandots
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    Don't cry a lot
    now you're a woman.
    Slow relaxed wipe your tears,
    don't wear yourself out.

    Walked leisurely along the shore
    with poise in sedate pace;
    all the worries and
    pain be clutched in place.

    Rule and fill your heart by reasons
    not by emotions;
    For the hardships and mishaps of life
    dealt with grace.

    Chin up. Live it up.
    In vivacity and gentleness.










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