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    dots Submission Name: The Way I Bleeddots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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       A phrase I love & live by "Poetry is a way for me to bleed" -Me


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    dotsThe Way I Bleeddots
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    Cut me up and read my blood, read every drip which is a single letter in the alphabet. A pile is a sentence a puddle is a story, there's never been a moment I've experienced glory. Not a moment where I could just hold my breath and relax, exhale, or enjoy a moment of silence. So I write it, describe it, and drive it into my veins, in my soul a tattoo covering me whole... again. Writing my pain for the world to read, poetry is a way for me bleed. The way I bleed...




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       Good imagery, I could feel the intensity. The distress, the no way out feeling.
    Good read, thanks for posting.
    | Posted on 2013-03-21 00:00:00 | by Windigo | [ Reply to This ]


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