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Four months away


Author: blackdemigod13
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Four months away



You were gone 4 months today, but I can still see your smile,
It feels like it has been a decade when it has only been a short while.
Sometimes it's hard to believe that you're really gone,
And at times I still expect to see you when I come home.
But even though I cannot hear your laugh or feel the embrace of your arms,
It helps to know that your watching over the rest of the family and me trying to keep us all from harm.
And the one thing that I'll always remember is that your love didn't leave the day you died,
It simply flew away with your soul high above the sky.




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