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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 859
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       In an open relationship...


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    Should I worry, should I care?
    That I may lose him in there
    It would be my fault, I started this
    And now I am caught, in a mist of bliss
    Scared I started his change
    Scared I fed his appetite
    Scared I gave him something to crave
    When I'm sleeping at night

    Maybe I should think twice
    Maybe it's already too late
    I feel as if it is
    But I'll sit and wait
    See what I have created
    See what I have done
    A fantasy once randomly generated
    Now became more serious than fun...




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