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    dots Submission Name: The Healings of a Broken Heart: Summarydots
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    Author: xBoyCrazieeXXXF
    ASL Info:    15/Female/New York
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/0/19
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    Description:
       Saphire Stonez - brokenhearted and alone. Odd Della Robbia - new guy and curious about Saphire. Will she forget everything from her past and finally decide to let someone in? And more importantly, will Odd be able to help her or end up making things even worse in her life?


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    dotsThe Healings of a Broken Heart: Summarydots
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    What would you do if you got your heart broken for the first time ever by a boy that you thought was truly the one for you? Cry for a while and let time heal it? Well, then answer this next question: What would you do if that guy was also going out with two of your best friends? Cry a little longer perhaps? Maybe end your friendship with those two friends of yours?

    Well, that's exactly what Saphire Stonez did. She had her heart broken by a guy, named William Dunbar; to her William Dumbar. She found out that her two best friends ever - Yumi Ishiyama and Aelita Schaeffer - who were both also oblivious to the fact that there was more than one girl in William's life. Not only did Saphire cry, but she also took a drastic decision. Her decision changed her whole life for the worse.

    Now, you must be wondering this: how can one boy, plus one little decision cause so much mayhem in Saphire's life. Well, to find out you're just going have to read from the beginning to the end.




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