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    dots Submission Name: Plagarizedots
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    Author: darkfeathers
    ASL Info:    19/female/beddybyeland
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/2/10
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
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    dotsPlagarizedots
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    Upside down... spinning around
    Lyrics, not mine, float ear to ear
    inside my skull
    words, not mine, describe me
    i fell down, yeah, i fell down
    melody and song, not mine, resonate
    reading my own mind, hearing, but not

    no cage needed, i'm stuck inside
    no air needed, i can't breathe anyway
    i don't need you, i don't need a flake

    all i do need, i can't fake
    i need a friend who knows what that means
    i need family so much more than they know
    i need God to show me I matter
    I need drugs to make me feel normal

    i don't get what i need
    life doesn't work that way




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      the opening words made e e eummings flash through my mind


    anyone lived in a pretty how town
    (with up so floating many bells down)
    spring summer autumn winter
    he sang his didn't he danced his did.

    Women and men(both little and small)
    cared for anyone not at all
    they sowed their isn't they reaped their same
    sun moon stars rain

    children guessed(but only a few
    and down they forgot as up they grew
    autumn winter spring summer)
    that noone loved him more by more

    when by now and tree by leaf
    she laughed his joy she cried his grief
    bird by snow and stir by still
    anyone's any was all to her

    someones married their everyones
    laughed their cryings and did their dance
    (sleep wake hope and then)they
    said their nevers they slept their dream

    stars rain sun moon
    (and only the snow can begin to explain
    how children are apt to forget to remember
    with up so floating many bells down)

    one day anyone died i guess
    (and noone stooped to kiss his face)
    busy folk buried them side by side
    little by little and was by was

    all by all and deep by deep
    and more by more they dream their sleep
    noone and anyone earth by april
    wish by spirit and if by yes.

    Women and men(both dong and ding)
    summer autumn winter spring
    reaped their sowing and went their came
    sun moon stars rain


    i hope you dont mind my sharing that poem with you but in some ways the undercurrent of your piece is the same as that of this e e cummings piece.


    your section in your piece of needs...
    maybe you need to let your family know just how much you need them... easier said than done i know.
    as for god... are you involved in a church or a youth group or something? if your need for god is real then sometimes surrounding yourself with others who love him can help you feel more loved/connected.

    sometimes getting what you need takes some pro-action on your part.
    do one thing every day that scares you... that one thing could be reaching out to people or joining a club or talking to your family about your feelings...
    sometimes i think we sit back and wait for what we need to make our lives better when we really need to be doing something to try make our lives easier or at least bearable..

    good luck xx
    | Posted on 2013-03-22 00:00:00 | by impossiblyme | [ Reply to This ]


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