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    dots Submission Name: In A Different Lightdots
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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
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    dotsIn A Different Lightdots
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    In a different light,
    the world can be clouded and gray.

    Twirling burnt, to swirling smoke,
    How can I see through the haze.

    In a different light this could be simple,
    When the sun is too bright, the moon will find me.

    In a different light,
    I do not forget the little ones, star like wishes shine along,
    Forgotten dreams still shinning through the sun,
    trying not to be left behind.

    Bounded, tied to each one of us,

    In a different light.




    Submitted on 2013-03-21 13:51:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautifully written poem, I really like your imagery
    | Posted on 2013-03-28 00:00:00 | by raspberry89 | [ Reply to This ]
      This one was surreal, it was like I was in a mist. In a different light, indeed.

    You have a lot of talent here and unlike most I've seen it is developed and honed into a specific style.

    --Carrie.
    | Posted on 2013-03-25 00:00:00 | by Carosuel | [ Reply to This ]


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