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    dots Submission Name: Night Calldots
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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsNight Calldots
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    A chill rapped in ice, a bone shattering fill.
    A call that is whispering through the air.

    Hear the sound, carving the stone.
    Twist the mountains, cap the snow.

    Fear the night, noiseless without the creatures insight.
    Wolves grin, red eyes gleam,

    Inviting you, you have been seen,
    No escape, no one can out run the wind...




    Submitted on 2013-03-21 14:04:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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