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    dots Submission Name: Two Dovesdots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    32/m/Ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 49/54/28
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
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    dotsTwo Dovesdots
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    Two doves perched on a dry branch.
    Dark clouds broke singing;
    Will this bond last when rain falls?




    Submitted on 2013-03-22 06:39:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Adorable, this is an excellent haiku :)
    | Posted on 2013-04-04 00:00:00 | by raspberry89 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is the second Haiku I've read from you. This piece is far superior, I love the way you captured the significance of a dove from today's society with such few words...

    I'd like to see more like this
    | Posted on 2013-03-26 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]


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