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    dots Submission Name: I won't falldots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    32/m/Ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 49/54/28
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI won't falldots
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    I never came to see you off.
    You knew I couldnít care.
    I bought a rose and threw it away,
    But spent a minute to stare.

    I thought of you most of today,
    But I didnít want to call.
    I stumbled through the rest of the day.
    You wonít see me fall.

    I hate to answer people.
    They ask me where you are.
    Before my voice goes feeble.
    I tell them in the car.

    I hate to make excuses.
    I hate that you are gone.
    But we know itís best for both of us.
    I promise I wonít fall.




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