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    dots Submission Name: am and pmdots
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    Author: quicksorrow
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 33/9/8
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsam and pmdots
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    The sun was just about to clear the sky
    open your eyes
    make coffee
    and you
    sigh
    walk
    talk
    rush to work
    rumble
    mumble
    about how bad the morning is

    Then the moon shyly appears
    weary your eyes
    turn on the tv
    and you
    sigh
    think
    shut up
    go to bed
    snore
    dream
    on how great life can be








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    ||| Comments |||
      A very relatable write...lol this is a daily routine for me. I like how you structure this, it reads nicely :)
    | Posted on 2013-03-28 00:00:00 | by raspberry89 | [ Reply to This ]
      Whenever I get to feel this way I consider the ramifications of imagination's immaturity and it helps me on my way!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-03-26 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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