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    dots Submission Name: Haikudots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Description:
       i am yaking a creative writing class for the first time and have never written Haiku so hers a few


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    dotsHaikudots
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    Okeechobee
    A cypress coffee table
    Overpass egret



    It can look like earth
    Until an air boat passes
    Still Seminole kept


    Everglades off ramp
    Semi scarred wetlands
    A gator calls




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