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    dots Submission Name: wind chilldots
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    Author: OneDarkFlame92
    ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 455/419/222
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswind chilldots
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    I've never been in love,
    the same way Florida has never experienced Winter

    but im walking to that place we used to go,
    and im really fucking cold.




    Submitted on 2013-03-26 20:24:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Never? That's a long word isn't it? When in denial (da Nile), go with the flow. Yeah, lot's of punch here.
    | Posted on 2013-03-30 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      i dont know if i can remember four lines of words totalling 28 words to have EVER packed that much punch.

    i really have nothing to say because youve sealed this piece up so well...

    maybe its time for a redefinition of love?
    | Posted on 2013-03-28 00:00:00 | by impossiblyme | [ Reply to This ]
      First off I have to wonder if that place is in Florida
    And are algators invoved if so is this never in love with
    Person still alive?
    | Posted on 2013-03-27 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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