wind chill

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wind chill

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I've never been in love, the same way Florida has never experienced Winter but im walking to that place we used to go, and im really fucking cold.

Submitted on 2013-03-26 20:24:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Never? That's a long word isn't it? When in denial (da Nile), go with the flow. Yeah, lot's of punch here.

| Posted on 2013-03-30 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

i dont know if i can remember four lines of words totalling 28 words to have EVER packed that much punch. i really have nothing to say because youve sealed this piece up so well... maybe its time for a redefinition of love?

| Posted on 2013-03-28 00:00:00 | by impossiblyme | [ Reply to This ]

First off I have to wonder if that place is in Florida And are algators invoved if so is this never in love with Person still alive?

| Posted on 2013-03-27 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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