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    dots Submission Name: Ashes to Ashesdots
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    Author: raspberry89
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 5/18/22
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsAshes to Ashesdots
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    Why speak
    when words become weak
    and everything you want is in the darkness
    and you are forever alone

    Happiness will never meet you
    and your prince will never seek you
    You will die unknowing
    from your heart with blood flowing

    Beating and pumping
    all of your life into nothing
    You'll be a stain on the soil
    until dust in the face of turmoil




    Submitted on 2013-03-28 05:51:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a sad poem, written by someone in a dark place. There is no feeling of hope, just sadness and remorse.
    I say this to the person who these feelings have stemmed from...don't give in. Each day brings new possibilities for love, for life, for joy. Search for the silver lining and you will find it.

    If you allow yourself the opportunities to smile, your whole persona and character begins to smile too. If you can only see the negative then you may inadvertantly turn away the things that could make you happy, and feel whole again.

    Sometimes you have to seek out your prince if he has become lost himself.
    | Posted on 2013-04-06 00:00:00 | by master raz | [ Reply to This ]


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