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    dots Submission Name: the problemdots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Rant/Love
    Total Views: 600
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    dotsthe problemdots
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    The problem isn't the fact that you left
    Or the fact that you stopped loving me
    The problem was that you led me on
    And when i tried to talk to you, to work out
    whatever issues you were having with me
    you pushed me aside, ignored and said nothing
    was wrong.

    I fought for you, with all my might
    I pushed myself beyond my limits
    The rope i was holding soon became
    a thin string
    My hands blistered and calloused.

    The problem is all those promises you made me,
    They haunt me until this day
    You said you would never walk away
    and that your love for me was forever to stay
    you told me i was your soul-mate
    and assured me, in your arms i would be safe.

    The problem wasn't that fact that you left.
    The problem was that you never even bothered
    to say goodbye or give a reason why...




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    ||| Comments |||
      I am really starting to dislike this person you are writing about
    you seem much too sweet to have had all these issues. I hope you feel better soon. I do remember my last breakup and it did take me a long time to recover and I was really
    in a black mood I did not eat for a month and I mean just that I lost 65 pounds that month
    | Posted on 2013-03-31 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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