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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    I am no one of importance.
    I have not changed the world in any way, shape, or form.
    I have not impacted anyone’s life for the better.

    I am not close to anyone
    I don’t have anyone to confide in.
    I have severe trust issues
    For all who have entered my life
    Have simply walked away and left
    Me broken hearted.

    I long to be someone’s beacon of hope
    In their dark gloomy world.
    I long to have a friendship so strong
    That in which we are able to finish each others sentences.
    I ache to know what true love feels like
    That kind that I read about in books.
    That kind that I watch in movies
    The only love I have ever known
    Has been one sided-never returned.




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