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    dots Submission Name: For i am an artist, and my body is the canvas. dots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsFor i am an artist, and my body is the canvas. dots
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    For i am an artist, and my body is the canvas.

    The sharp glass slid perfectly on my wrist.
    The relief followed.
    Blood: a strong, bright, deep red color; crimson
    began to outline the cut.
    who knew blood could be so mesmerizing.

    I disgust myself.
    But old habits are hard to kill.

    The hoodies hide the scars well.
    no one even suspects
    i paint a smile pretty well
    quite deceiving to ones eyes.
    You'd be surprised what a good liar i have become.

    I paint the good, not the bad.
    i paint the happy not the sad.
    i hide the ugly under shades of pretty
    I hide the truth behind layers of smiles and lies.
    It's hard to uncover what's behind the actual
    painting...

    For i am an artist, and my body is the canvas.




    Submitted on 2013-03-30 10:43:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was amazing. I can relate to it very well and it's very well worded. You can actually feel that pain when reading this. Very well done!
    | Posted on 2013-03-31 00:00:00 | by shaylikestacos | [ Reply to This ]


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