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    dots Submission Name: 20 Wordsdots

    Author: rubymoon
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 155/162/91
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    flowers bending in the wind.
    Beauty of simple things
    seen through a window pane.

    Memories, to keep you warm

    Submitted on 2013-03-31 10:09:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      beauty is indeed as simple
    as its capture has proven to be complex

    once she was considered the soul of devotion
    now she's a palsied wrinkle of flesh...

    Just some thoughts that your thoughts inspired.
    | Posted on 2013-04-20 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely zen-quality to this. Taking the time to see things and enjoy them as they are.
    | Posted on 2013-04-03 00:00:00 | by Aym | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm amazed. i actually counted the words! to describe how this made me feel would take more that 20 words and it wouldnt be as intense. i like,a lot.
    | Posted on 2013-04-01 00:00:00 | by pixie_007 | [ Reply to This ]
      short, but packs a punch.
    I love the minimal imagery that creates a very vague feeling.

    Could be about anything really.

    I enjoyed this
    | Posted on 2013-03-31 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]

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