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    dots Submission Name: sadness is my homedots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotssadness is my homedots
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    My head is much more clear
    When the tears form in my eyes
    when my wrists are stained
    and i become so numb.

    Sadness can be addicting
    in a way so hard to explain
    it has now become my home
    It lingers, here to stay.

    Depression is my neighbor
    For he never truly fades.
    He goes away on occasions
    but always returns in the middle
    of the night.
    Sometimes he brings his companions;
    Anger, Confusion, Bitter, Hurt and Lonely.

    And let me tell you, in a building own
    by sadness, along with depression as a neighbor,
    lets not forget his honored guests..
    they can throw one hell of a party...




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      A sad piece which makes me asks why is the author so melancholy. Is the author contemplating suicide by "staining her wrists"? Disturbing piece that makes me want to hug the author and offer a shoulder to cry upon.
    | Posted on 2013-04-16 00:00:00 | by yeoh | [ Reply to This ]
      So sad and lovely its almost like you are speaking to me from
    the grave inviting me in to enjoy the melancholy with you.
    I can feel the unearthed worms leaving slime trail tears down my cheeks as I weep for a life that never was.
    | Posted on 2013-03-31 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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