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    dots Submission Name: the truth is...dots

    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/What you did
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    dotsthe truth is...dots

    i dont want to feel like i lost out,
    that what happened was my fault,
    no one should ask what you did,

    i dont want this to be about you.

    i never want to see you again,
    or even think about the times we had,
    no one should ask me where you are,

    i dont want this to be about you.

    i dont want to hear your name ,
    or even dream about you in my sleep,
    no one should tell me how your doing,

    cause i dont want this to be about you.

    everyday i woke up,my misery was visible.
    all anyone ever did was watch me die inside.
    i was the one who got hurt and no one cared,

    and yet,this is all about you...

    Submitted on 2013-04-01 04:35:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it sort of feel like you are saying

    The presence of you is much more than I can take...
    It will always about you, the one who left me here
    (hurting and bruising and aching)

    like you want no part of it yet... it is in every part of you
    | Posted on 2013-04-01 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]

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