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    dots Submission Name: knock, knockdots
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    Author: KotaNashi
    Elite Ratio:    5.75 - 29/36/18
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsknock, knockdots
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    tell the wolf i'm at his door
    scratching, sniffing, calmly sedated

    licking my lips,
    snatching at wisps, howling, growling,
    impatiently waiting




    Submitted on 2013-04-01 19:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is quite a playful piece (in my opinion).
    well, i like it :)
    | Posted on 2013-04-02 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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