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    dots Submission Name: quakedots
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    Author: KotaNashi
    Elite Ratio:    5.75 - 29/36/18
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I JUST WANT TO FEEL SECURITY
    i want the ground beneath my feet to not move so suddenly
    i want to be able to catch up with myself
    and shake hands politely




    Submitted on 2013-04-01 20:03:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wouldn't that be nice. shaking hands with yourself. like good job self. security is nice. i've never had it across the board 100%. me i question things. i think it's like. idk. better the ground be shaky than to live on the delusion of solid ground during an earthquake. something of the sorts. good expression though. this is a good place to vent.
    | Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      SayWhat!?!?

    Why on earth is this comment less.

    Oi!
    Okie dokie
    I can't relate to this right now so maybe it's just grand timing. I like it.

    One step at a time, I wanna say. Not being stable is a disjointed feeling. The poem reflects that well...I see this style in your journal. So this being the format you like to use?
    Just curious as I think it fits...they seem to be more prolific that way.

    Brava
    Peace
    | Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]


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