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    dots Submission Name: A Mountain dots

    Author: raspberry89
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 5/18/22
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsA Mountain dots

    My soul's made of stone
    From triumph to tragedy
    A mountain has grown

    This stature my own
    Forever building higher
    Til peaks fashion thrones

    The angels have flown
    To wherever, without doubt
    Mountains stand alone

    Submitted on 2013-04-02 14:58:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The soul we search of form

    Misty mountain heights
    too precipitous and craggy to tread.
    We imagine infinite possibilities
    and traverse the talus instead.
    Wandering through frost bitten landscapes
    the macabre gruesome of yore.
    Sentience breeds visions of panacea
    entreating us to ask for more.
    But enigma is a treacherous tirade
    and the berserker is at the door.
    Revulsions list toward recompence
    reality seems a whore
    The wanton wayward gist of pith
    is diabolical dementia.
    How to accomplish bailiff’s rake
    while preserving in absentia.
    There is no more impunity
    for those who live with sooth.
    And yet our souls would long for grace
    and try to call it truth.

    | Posted on 2013-04-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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