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    dots Submission Name: Forgotten Friendsdots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    32/m/Ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 49/54/28
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsForgotten Friendsdots
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    Conveniently forgotten, those people who were there;
    You were at times one of them, and then it mattered, when they didn’t care.
    In your lowest lows and those times to be forgotten,
    They were not your type, but they were there through the rotten.

    Conveniently forgotten, those days when you were hoping.
    Those days when ahead was more important than brethren.
    Those days that made you; you, while still in waiting;
    Now the ‘You’ has conveniently forgotten.

    I accept selfish as myself; Truth, do forgive.
    I was blind and ignorant as any human could.
    Though words and bonds have faded away,
    I've learnt to accept this truth, and for Friends I pray.




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      I understand this feeling quite well. Fortunately, I've been blessed to have recently had a forgotten friend get in touch and talk to me about how much she doesn't want us to stop being friends or forget each other, no matter how busy or ambitious, happy or sad either of us get.
    | Posted on 2013-04-22 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]


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