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    Author: raspberry89
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 5/18/22
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsBallistics dots
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    Once you've lost love,



    loving is never the same thereafter.



    You'll cherish more your laughter.



    You'll think differently when you see a man.



    His looks will go through you like a bullet through your heart.




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