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    dots Submission Name: so you do it. dots

    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 297
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    dotsso you do it. dots

    you take the blade and penetrate your skin deep enough, in hopes you will bleed to death because this world is no longer worth living in.

    And you run into the middle of a highway hoping that a car will strike you and you will die because living at home is worse than living in hell.

    you over dose on pills wanting to end your life because school is a nightmare and the bullying and the torment doesn't stop.

    so you do it.

    you stand on the edge of the tallest building in your city debating if you should take the leap and end the hurting.

    you lay in the train track waiting for the train to come as you close your eyes and wonder what you could have possibly done to God to deserve such a fucked up life.

    you question your existence everyday. you curse out the gods you were raised to believe in.
    how can those who claim to be so just punish those who never done wrong and let people who least deserve live the good life.

    you look around and you see, the poor getting poorer as the rich gets richer. the abuse taking places at homes and those know yet don't make a whisper. you see the damage in peoples eyes or perhaps in their bodies yet you never volunteer to hear out their stories. you witness the bullying that takes places yet you don't speak out about it.

    so they do it.

    they end their lives in hopes that all the suffering will end but the hypocrite always speak out when the damage has been done..and after someone end their lives, there is just no going back.

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      Wow that is the best way someone ever has explain this. I feel like this everyday. But no one to tun to. this has made me think some more proms i can do keep up the good work..
    | Posted on 2013-04-18 00:00:00 | by angelagresham | [ Reply to This ]

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