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    dots Submission Name: Anger Managementdots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 335/330/93
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I have had a moment of contemplation and realized my own true belief of what "anger" is and does...these are my thoughts about this..


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    I had found you for a moment,
    and that is all that's it takes..
    for you to sneak in and make your self a place.
    Its not as if you are hidden here.
    Your so out in plain sight, that even the sight of you makes more of you come...
    and you sit at the table with me.
    I have to rationalize my meaning for you to be there,
    because it is me that is not asking you to leave..
    you are sitting as a guest.
    Even though you are a disruptive cord,
    an "out of order area"
    the disease of you is spreading
    and I'm actually egging it on..

    As I sit in my own bubble,
    I act as though I have no control over the sickness that is spreading.
    I do know, I have no will for it to stop.
    Even though it gives me nothing in return,
    in that moment I would feel lost without it.
    But what it is and what it is doing
    its ruining everything I've worked on...
    I'm allowing it to tear everything up,
    I almost enjoy watching it burn..
    for the sake of the heartache I get in return...

    Anger is a sickness, and sometimes the control it has is the only control you have, in that situation..know that it can be better...you have to ask it to leave.




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      So many people are not even aware of this concept, the resources are out there, hopefully more and more people will sit down to figure it out like you have.

    Even though it gives me nothing in return,
    in that moment I would feel lost without it.

    I think this line is the strongest in the piece, it is so forword and honest and it is so universally true. When you give place to any emotion or entertain any thought it does begin to root and reproduce and grow, getting rid of it would empty you out, so you have to find something to replace it. Peace and joy are my favorite to claim. :)

    It would be really cool if you followed up on this piece and explored more on the other side of getting rid of that anger, a piece about the process, I think would add to your writing arsenal. Just a suggestion to get more out of you! Thanks for sharing this piece I enjoy your work always!
    | Posted on 2013-04-13 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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