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    dots Submission Name: Black Insectdots
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    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsBlack Insectdots
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    I am standing at the crossroad,
    with the Devil by my side,
    only god knows where this road leads,
    But the Devil is my guide,

    On this road, I am alone, and it just occurred to me,
    that this home, alone, its all my destiny.
    flesh and bone, and parts unknown, life's own perversity,
    cold stone, sex clones, in our land of select diversity.

    I feel like a fool every time,
    that I think of you at night,
    But I am just a black insect,
    Pulled in by your light.

    I am standing at the crossroad,
    with a crucifix in hand,
    trying to fuck an angel,
    playing in the devils band




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    ||| Comments |||
      I think I'm in love with this.
    | Posted on 2014-10-17 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]
      It sucks like vomit.
    | Posted on 2013-04-29 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      I may not believe in God or the Devil but i enjoyed your use of them to make analogies.
    | Posted on 2013-04-18 00:00:00 | by BlackRayne | [ Reply to This ]
      You give new meaning to Rock and Roll, like sea sickness.
    | Posted on 2013-04-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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