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    dots Submission Name: Write Me Some Jazzdots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31/82/75
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 1298
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    Bytes: 740



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    dotsWrite Me Some Jazzdots
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    You can write a love song.
    You can ride away.
    You can write some country
    Every single day.

    But I dare you to make someone
    Happy when they're sad.
    I dare you to make them
    Depressed when they're glad.

    I dare you to write me some jazz.

    I don't care about your damned dead dog.
    I don't care that you just got married.
    Don't care where your father is buried.

    Cause you can buy a truck.
    You can smoke some grass.
    I don't really care that you're tappin'
    that bartender's ass.

    I dare you to write me some jazz.
    I dare you to write me some jazz.




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