A Train To Catch

Author: eggshells ASL Info:    23/M/WA Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31 /82 /75 Words: 76

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A Train To Catch

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I'm not gonna change myself, Cause you walked out that door. I'm not gonna get up, Cause you wanted more. I'm feeling pretty good, Lyin' on the train tracks. The evil in people, Make me wretch. I'm sorry girl, I've really gotta go. I know, You'll miss me so. But I've got a a train to catch. Don't lie to me. Don't lie to me. Quit kidding yourself. Don't lie to me.

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I'd rather not catch that train lubricate the track with my brains you may mourn me little miss, my girl but stars realign and warm new worlds... Just some thoughts derived from your thoughts...

| Posted on 2013-04-20 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

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