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    dots Submission Name: Dwelldots
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    Author: Mepo
    ASL Info:    22/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 20/35/15
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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       I confused myself.


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    dotsDwelldots
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    Let us get rid of our trivial things,
    Like how we dwell upon trivial means,
    if every mean has eventually an end
    then why must well dwell again and again.








    Submitted on 2013-04-17 01:26:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm a fan of this. It's a positive reminder, as I'm certainly guilty of dwelling on meaningless, arguably crippling things over and over. The more I'm connected with the moment, the easier it is for me to actually live and be happy. The more I'm focused on the trivial, the more my life seems to stand still, and moments that could have been great go by with little meaning.
    | Posted on 2013-04-19 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]
      Let us get rid of our trivial things
    as how we dwell upon trivial means
    if every meaning has to eventually end
    why must we dwell on it again and again?


    Food for thought or not!
    | Posted on 2013-04-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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