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i saw the storm
outside, trapped behind
somewhat clear inventions
felt the demon
in my back, shiver like post-traumatic absence-of-you
bargaining with the wind
god showed up
set like a stone, unbent by the elements
rubbing scarred wrists like unlucky rabbit’s foot
i met him
half way, between tourniquet and noose
holy ghost-shot eyes
and i screamed out
in a whisper, frequencies carved for afterlife ears
“is this what you wanted or is this what you feared?”
| Very creative but I found this kind of confusing..I had to reread it and really think about what some of your phrases meant. I like where you are going with this though :) thanks for sharing||| Posted on 2013-04-22 00:00:00 | by raspberry89 | [ Reply to This ] || and God said|
"scream at the image in the glass -
he makes his own visions
come to pass"
Just some thoughts embedded in the quarry of your thoughts. If God is as omniscient as we believe, then nothing should surprise Him, not even the weariness that comes with humanity's questionable choices. It's probably more likely that His eyes are tinged with infinite sadness...
Nice imagery, btw.
|| Posted on 2013-04-20 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ] |