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    dots Submission Name: Pain..dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsPain..dots
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    Some people wonder what is real pain is.
    Some may know what physical pain is but what is emotional pain.
    Only a few know what is really like.
    It is like a fork stabbing your inside out and peeling away your life with every stroke but just don't choke now you mite not wake up from your slumber..




    Submitted on 2013-04-19 08:20:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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