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    dots Submission Name: Ma Lassdots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMa Lassdots
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    A found ma lass, a loved ma lass
    Wae body mind an soul
    A gave my hert, a lost ma hert
    Ma world at last wiz whole

    A kissed ma lass, a caressed ma lass
    Ma feelings wur sae divine
    A felt true love, a knew true love
    She telt me she wiz mine

    A asked ma lass, a begged ma lass
    Tae be ma bonnie bride
    A dreamed a dream, a special dream
    Thit she’d be by ma side

    A hurt ma lass a lost ma lass
    Tae a place a ken no where
    A love ma lass a miss ma lass
    Fur noo an ever mair




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      I didn't really understand much of the words but I really like this..it has nice flow and rhythm and I just ended up with a smile while reading this out loud..really good :)
    | Posted on 2013-04-24 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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