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Ma Lass

Author: Frank Maguire
ASL Info:    57 / UK
Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846 /1390 /288
Words: 112
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Ma Lass

A found ma lass, a loved ma lass
Wae body mind an soul
A gave my hert, a lost ma hert
Ma world at last wiz whole

A kissed ma lass, a caressed ma lass
Ma feelings wur sae divine
A felt true love, a knew true love
She telt me she wiz mine

A asked ma lass, a begged ma lass
Tae be ma bonnie bride
A dreamed a dream, a special dream
Thit she’d be by ma side

A hurt ma lass a lost ma lass
Tae a place a ken no where
A love ma lass a miss ma lass
Fur noo an ever mair

Submitted on 2013-04-19 16:59:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I didn't really understand much of the words but I really like has nice flow and rhythm and I just ended up with a smile while reading this out loud..really good :)
| Posted on 2013-04-24 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]

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