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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    When I was a child finger prints were left on me.
    I never forgot about that.
    And how scared I was when nighttime came
    Because those same hands were sure to come.
    When I was young I witness death.
    Blood and screams and tears and pain.
    I saw him take his last breath
    A bullet-from a spiteful gang.
    My cousin laid there dead.
    growing up i heard the hurtful words
    which hit harder than physical blows
    i felt the rage building up inside me
    but nothing i can do to stop it..
    later on i had my heart broken
    not once not twice but quite a few times..
    all by the same person
    so now my walls are build so high
    surely no one in their right mind would climb
    and i keep hearing
    only bad things happen to bad people
    and to those who deserve it
    but life has taught me better.
    i know enough to know..
    that sometimes
    bad things happen to good people
    while good things can happen to those who are bad.
    life; a paradox.




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