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    dots Submission Name: Singularity & Sheepdots
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    Author: raspberry89
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 5/18/22
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Singularity & Sheep
    Nobody can define me
    There are no words that can accurately describe me
    I am my own being
    No one elses experience shares the same meaning
    Therefore, life is complicated
    And your opinions are overstated
    They bring you to insult your own existence
    Causing you to become your own hindrance
    I know the thought of thinking is intimidating
    But you must do so before you begin stating
    Meaning must be developed and formed
    Old beliefs must be adorned
    To share ideas in the future, as in the past
    Communication belongs to the creative and steadfast




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