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    dots Submission Name: True Love <3dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTrue Love <3dots
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    Some wonder if they would ever find true love.

    They wonder what is true love like.

    Would it be different.

    you gotta be patience for real love.

    True love can be hard to find or it could be easy.

    You know that it true love when you feel like you can be your self and you don't have to try to impress them.

    True love last forever.

    True love is like they feel like they have known you forever.

    But they have only know you for a few months.

    When you guys break up you would always get back together again making up the last hour that you have broken up in.

    What is true love?

    It would be your SOULS MATE the One that would be there for YOU Thu the hard times. No matter what happen you would be together forever.
    The ONE that would never hurt you.

    True love will be Different for everyone but you will know when that comes. Don't try to look for it. It will come faster then you know it. <3




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      I think this is a childlish outlook on love. That is all
    | Posted on 2013-04-28 00:00:00 | by Akiko Hime | [ Reply to This ]


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