Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Nothingness dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 644
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 811



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNothingness dots
    -------------------------------------------


    I am forever numb to life and its obstacles that i am forced to deal with
    Tears no longer stain these cheeks of mine
    My life is made up nothing more than the sexual abuse inflicted upon me at a young age
    The drug use I choose to get involved with
    And the attempted suicide with that 12 gauge that has forever left its mark on me
    A reminder of sorts I suppose
    A reminder of just how flawed of a human being I am.
    The scars will forever reside embedded into my porcelain skin.
    Fragmented bullets have found their final resting place within me...

    I am nothing more than the obstacles God has forced upon me and to continually face...
    Alone
    I am nothing more than
    A victim
    A recovering drug addict
    A lost soul




    Submitted on 2013-04-23 23:31:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      You are so much more than this my friend!
    | Posted on 2013-12-14 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]
      No one is "just" anything. Everyone has a purpose and affects those they come into contact with. Don't ever sell yourself short. Your message touches others, and so also do you. Thank you for sharing in such painful detail. It takes a lot of courage, and you are.
    | Posted on 2013-05-03 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      I believe life does not give us more than we can bare. You are here, in this moment, in this second, you are still here . You are .
    | Posted on 2013-04-28 00:00:00 | by Akiko Hime | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    197271

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry