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    dots Submission Name: To a faraway Lovedots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsTo a faraway Lovedots
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    at the passing of days

    I hear

    sweet melody of the silent winds
    as soft as your voice
    whispering to the unseen
    precepts from my heart
    to greet yours

    as you feel it softly brush your ear
    to gaze in those brown eyes
    I have never seen,

    feel the shape of lips
    I have never touched,

    and hear the baritones
    of the voice
    that echoed in my dreams ...




    Submitted on 2013-04-24 08:32:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It was clear you had someone important to you in mind when you wrote this, and it speaks volumes that most can relate to. I certainly can. Thank you for this. I hope your love isn't far away forever :)
    | Posted on 2013-04-27 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]
      To a faraway love indeed.;) Just beautiful..
    | Posted on 2013-04-26 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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