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    dots Submission Name: The Seed and The Seadots
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    Author: griffin
    Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 0/2/29
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Seed and The Seadots
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    Like a good mystery the end came
    As many do
    With a twist and a turn
    Done and exhausted
    Elated and joyful
    Empty....
    Then under the white light
    I held the sea in my hands
    Mesmerized by the cool blue innocence
    A silent wave washing my sins asunder
    Calm and bliss were mine at last
    With the sea's first kiss





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