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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 776
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    Bytes: 603



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       Old poem of mine..


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    dotsyoudots
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    You will forget about me
    Like how the sand slip from my cold fingers
    To go back to the sea
    Where it is vast and free

    Where you are free

    I will wait on a staggering rock
    Underneath the same sky
    But a distant shore
    So far you won't hear me scream


    I will learn to love again
    As I have loved you
    Tender on your skin
    Shy from your eyes
    Pure in my heart

    As you are free
    Where you are free

    Be happy



    August 12, 2008




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      I will always be a fan of someone who can fused emotions into words.. you need not read between the lines to understand this one.. to me this isn't so much about being free from an ill fated love.. to me.. this is about acceptance.. the will to go on..
    | Posted on 2013-07-31 00:00:00 | by E. Audine | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so heartbreaking yet sweet
    setting love free
    very nice te :)
    | Posted on 2013-04-30 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]
      A soul-chilling, heartwrenching read for anyone who's had to let go of love. I found myself flashing back to my own loss, and almost let myself feel that same way again. Very powerful.
    | Posted on 2013-04-29 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice
    | Posted on 2013-04-26 00:00:00 | by voiceless | [ Reply to This ]


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